Friday, October 1, 2010

Found in the Bottom of a Bottle

..I used to love...
....and thought I was loved...
and was told
at midnight
as she
carressed
I had the stars in my eyes
....
she's gone now
it's all wrong now
and I cried
till I bleed
all I have is my scarry eyes
....

3 comments:

  1. and I cry
    till I bleed

    -OR-

    and I cried
    till I bled

    can't have it that way it is, even with poetic license. Sorry.

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  2. Will take that with proper humility and advisement.

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  3. If you ever want a proof reader, just let me know! Spell check does not proof!

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